OMEGA - Come Out Swinging - Finished - *Spoilers*

[OMEGA]

Okay my 8th AMV is finished, it turned out great ^^, this time I´m telling the story of the main character Ippo Makunouchi, so I hope its kind of understable for you people, comments are apreciated. (the flashes looks a little off in youtube, WMM is fault in the compression process ¬¬)

Tittle: Come Out Swinging
Song: Come Out Swinging
Song Artist: The Offspring
Finished: YES
Time: 2:52
Anime: Hajime No Ippo ("Fighting Spirit" in the USA)
Spoilers: if you haven´t seen it then yes
Download:



Enjoy it and tell what you think of it, and of course if you understand it lol

Lyrics:

You braced and hold it all inside
Its more than you can stand
No one around even tries
Tries to understand

[Chorus]
Don't turn away
Don't turn away
Come out swinging
Come out Alone Or either way
Throw it away
As long as you're swinging
One day you'll get by

You're place seems wearing out of line
Right beside your bed
The scene replays a million times
Stuck inside your head
And though you've stayed in place
You're mind escapes
Read between the lies
The smile that's on you're face

You fake like you're ok

[Chorus]
Don't turn away
Don't turn away
Come out swinging
Out on your own
or either way
Throw it away
You may be stinging
You'll get by

Don't turn away
Don't turn away
Come out swinging
Come out Alone again

Play inside then guide away

Midnight
No sleep
You're inside
You scream
To know
No one hears you
For daylight
You need
Today, day
One more try

[Chorus]
Don't turn away
Don't turn away Come out swinging
Come out Alone
Or either way
Throw it away
You may be stinging
You'll get by

Don't turn away
Don't turn away
Come out swinging
Never alone again

Laying inside
Lead you (lead you)
Through
So you'll get by

[OMEGA]

double posting to tell you guys that I finished it, no one commented the preview (here in the forum ) so I expect some comments now lol.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RljgN0SaMG0

*read what it says in the first post too ^^*

[XHunter]

ok first and only tip im going to give you after watching this AMV.

Flash's are OK... just dont Over use them ... also make sure that the flash size is not overlaping the video picture..

also I've noticed when you make AMVs you dont keep the same Screen Aspect Ratio

for Example

in this AMV the Screen Aspect Ratio changed to these four sizes

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Main Video
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White Flash

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Random Clip
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Flying Clip Towards Screen


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so it would have been best if you made sure all your screen sizes were the same size like the exmple shown below.

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Main Video, Flying Clip Towards Screen, Random Clip, White Flash
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well looking past that your AMV was good a big improvement from your last one "Mega Phenomenon "

I give it a 9/10

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