Nice preview, so here are some pointers that I see. Keep in mind that these are things that I would do and may not necessarily be something you might want to do, so take my advice with a grain of salt.
Anyway, here are somethings that
I THINK MAY help out your AMV
You might want to try a slow fade in a the start of your AMV and see how that looks. If you don't like the way it looks, keep your AMV the way it is.
At the part where it fades out from Bly and shows Rockman on the ground. I would fade into that clip instead of having it suddenly appear. This is help with the slow and dramatic feel in the intro of your AMV.
The 0:15 - 0:16 the part where the guy screams "Break out!"? you might want to hold off on that Bly clip to match it up with the song. If you notice the part were it shows Bly hitting Rockman, you should match that part up with the first DRUM SMASH. From what I can tell, its a few milliseconds off. After that part make sure to keep the up the beat and the sync until 0:32 where the song slows down again and has the drum beats as the main focus of the song along with the guitar.
Try to be creative at that part. Maybe clips fading in and out from black synced to the drum beats? I don't know you think of something cool that fits your style. Thats my advice and I can't wait to see this finished.