Shirk Deio - Rockman.EXE - Who I Am Hates Who I've Been

[Shirk Deio]

Name: Rockman.EXE - Who I Am Hates Who I've Been (v1, v2 coming soon!)
Author: Relient K
Song: Who I Am Hates Who I've Been
Anime: EXE, STREAM, BEAST+
YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NuXCEB8ENxs
Download: http://download.yousendit.com/3F7E3073422F6459

[GunnerEXE]

That was pretty good lol I didnt think anyone would use this song but you did haha good job man

[zero maverick]

its a good amv : i liked this
but i think you did many correspondence lyrics/mouth

[KingForte]

That was a pretty good AMV but, If you were able to watermark your AMV why didnt you just go over the timestraps?

[JH24]

I really enjoyed watching this amv. I like the music in it and everything fitted very well IMO. Awesome job!!!

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There is one thing I want to mention if it is allright with you:

I like what you have done with the lip-synching although there were one or two instances were it looked a bit weird, as if it was dragged out, by lack of a better word. I have to go now but I could, if you want, name those moments that I noticed. I'll come back tomorrow and I will edit my post. I will also look at your video again, I am a bit tired at the moment so i could have missed something.
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[Shirk Deio]

[KingForte]

[Xero]

[BattleReady22]

[Lok]

[JH24]

I first wanted to edit my post, but I think it would be better if I made a new one.

I am not an AMV-maker myself but I hope I can still be of help, I am writing down things I noticed. (although Lok did an awesome job on that already, so certain things i write down could be the same)

Everything I didn't write down means it is perfect and I really liked it.

Here we go:


1. The start is good and the flashing is fitting, however I did get sore eyes watching it. But it is very well done. I don't know if there is a way to make it easier on the eyes. (I have no experience in AMV-making)

2. I already noticed this yesterday but the Protoman/Blues (I don't know which name you prefer) lip synch didn't entirely fit. It even took me out of the song for a moment. I can't really describe what it is. (Lok already pointed this out) around 00:29.

3. Around 1:03 with Netto, the lip-synch fits but Netto's expression doesn''t really seem to fit with the intensity of the text. As Lok mentioned the eyebrows look a bit weird as well.

4. Around 1:19, the flashes again, they look really good and fit very well but they do hurt my eyes, but this more likely has to do with me. I have very weak eyes as they were affected by a heavy illness I had when I was a baby. So that could be the reason.

5. It could be me but around 2:15-2:21 with the long sentence and lip-synch of Netto I was immediately distracted. This felt so strange, but Lok already mentioned this.

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I haven't really added anything new, I made this message yesterday before I went to bed but I didn't want to post it because I wanted to see your AMV again. You have done an awesome job! And there were so many scenes with lip-synch and a majority of them fitted very well.

You AMV is really enjoyable to watch as I have watched it several times and I like it every time. I am not going to rate your AMV because I have no experience in rating or creating AMV's. But I am going to say it was very very good for me personally. Your AMV has a good pace, is very enjoyable to watch, has a lot of very fitting moments and has a perfect mix of action and calmer scenes.

My favourite part is between 2:15 and 3:15, for me personally these scenes were the most intense. But I liked it from beginning to the end.

[Shirk Deio]

Thanks for the comments! I will work on those corrections tomorrow and hopefully upload tomorrow (might take a little longer, and be uploaded Monday).