by xmagic » Wed Jan 30, 2008 9:27 pm
I like the emotional synchup in this song. I feel that it tells an interesting story, or tells a story we know in an interesting way. There are a couple of rough transitions (transitions from one video clip to the next that jar the eye) though, such as the one right after we see Blues in the sickbed. It would be best to smooth those out.
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