Just a few tips
Sometimes the text was kind of hard to red (White over bright colors). And you need to capitalize the letter
I when used by it self.
- Example: Comic 3 -
"Well I better get going"
Also the first letter in the word
I'm needs to be capitalized as well.
- Example: Comic 3 -
"Hello I'm new here."
Just some grammar tips I thought you could use. Other then that your comic was nice.